1.  

I can meet the E.T before I am dying. 죽기 전에 이티를 만날 수 있을 꺼야.

I can/will be able to meet E.T before I die. (dying은 죽어가는)

When I was young, I watched that the movie “E.T” 15times. 내가 어렸을 때, 나는 이티 영화를 15번이나 봤다. 

When I was young, I watched the movie E.T 15 times. - 영화 이름을 언급하니까 that을 쓸 필요는 없음.

Every watching the movie, I was thinking “If I grown up. I might meet the E.T.” 그것을 볼 때 마다 나는 생각했다. 내가 만약 어른이 된다면 아마 이티를 만날 수 있을 꺼야.

Every time I watched the movie, I thought, "When I grow up, I might be able to meet E.T."

And, I will tell him. “I love you, since I was a kid.” 그러면 나는 그에게 말해줄 거야 내가 아이였을 때부터 좋아했다고.

2.

It is much advantage per insect. May be

곤충마다 많은 장점들이 있을 꺼야. 아마도

음... 곤충에게는 advantage, per는 쓰지 않아요.. advantage는 사람의 장점 같은 걸 얘기할 때 쓰는 게 아니고, '유리하다', '이득이다' 라고 할 때. per는 쉽게 말해, '~ 당'이라고 이해하면 될 듯. 곤충당 장점이라고 말하지 않을 거잖아요.

It sticks the name tag per book.

책마다 이름표가 붙어 있을 꺼야.

per를 쓰려면, It is three thousand won per book. 책 한 권당 3000원이야.

3.

I seem able to be happy her.

나는 그녀를 기쁘게 할 수 있을 것 같다.

seem 을 쓸 때 주어를 I 로 쓰는 경우는 드물어요. 자기 자신의 경우 ~처럼 보인다가 아니라, ~일 거라고 생각한다. 등으로 바꾸죠.

You seem like hiding something to me. Tell me the true.

너 나에게 뭔가 숨기는 것처럼 보인다. 진실을 말해봐

You seem like hiding something from me. Tell me the truth.

4.

if The Nell concert were canceled, I might be angry.

만약 넬의 콘서트가 취소된다면, 나는 화가 날 것 같아.

If Nell's concert is cancelled I might be angry.

The Nell concert had to be postponed for a couple of year.

넬의 콘서트는 2년 정도 미뤄질 것이다.

Nell's concert will be postponed for a couple of years. (미뤄져야 할 것이다. - will have to be)

5.

Honestly that I never stolen the Stollen.

나는 정직하게 말하는데 슈틀렌을 훔치지 않았다.

Honestly, I didn't steal the Stollen.  / Honestly, I never stole the Stollen.

He honestly he loves you!  - He loves you honestly.(정직하게 사랑해) He really loves you. (그는 널 정말로 사랑해.)

그는 널 정말로 사랑해!

1.

Let me tell you. How I steal the Stollen.

내가 어떻게 슈틀렌을 훔쳤는지 말할 게요

Let me tell you how I stole the Stollen.

Let me go to school. I have to study. Now!!!

학교가게 해주세요. 지금 공부해야 된다고요!!!

2.

Let’s dance!  Before sunset  - Let's dance before sunset!

해가 지기 전까지 우리 춤추자!

Let’s start because, another team already start, (방심하다) We will be loser.

Let's start. The other team has already started. If we are careless, we will lose.

3.

Take me to this address. Please. - please는 새로운 문장이 아니라 붙여서.

이 주소로 데려다 주세요.

Please take a fastest way. - Please take the fastest way.

제일 빠른 길로 가주세요.

4.

You’d better wake him up at 6 in the afternoon. Because he must watch the baseball game.

너 저녁 6시에 그를 깨우는 게 좋을 꺼야. 왜냐하면 그는 무조건 야구경기를 봐야 하거든,

You’d better have to confirm your schedule. - You'd better confirm your schedule.

스케줄을 확인 하는 게 좋을걸?

5.

Why don’t you go to your room and clean the room.

방에 들어가 방 청소를 하는 게 어떠니?

Why don’t you stop to listening the music or volume down. 

음악 소리를 낮추거나 음악 듣는 것을 그만두는 게 어때?

Why don't you turn the volume down, or turn it off(stop listening to the music)?

6.

How about interrupting the Banya’s project? - the는 빼야됨.

반야의 프로젝트를 방해하는 거 어때?

How about describing the view of seoul. - seoul = Seoul

서울의 풍경을 묘사해보는 거 어때?

1.

I wish I hadn’t been sick yesterday; I could have helped you with your project.

내가 아프지만 않았어도, 너의 프로젝트를 도와줄 수 있었을 텐데. - 어제 아프지 않았다면..(더 간절하게)

I wish I don’t eat meal every day. - I wish I don't have to eat everyday.  = 매일 (밥을) 먹지 않아도 된다면 좋겠어.

매일 밥을 안 먹으면 좋을 텐데.

2.

I’d like to change the Pass word. - password

비밀번호를 변경하고 싶습니다.

I’d like to make a reservation.

예약하고 싶습니다.

3.

Could you tell me where the Haja Center?  -  Could you tell me where Haja Center is?

하자센터가 어디에 있는지 알려주시겠어요?

Could you show me My Wedding dress? 흠. 왜 갑자기 'My'와 'Wedding'에 대문자가 붙을까..

내 결혼드레스를 보여주시겠어요?

4.

I think you should go back your sit. - seat(자리) sit(앉다)

내 생각에, 자리로 돌아가는 게 좋을걸?

We shouldn’t eat too much. Because we spent whole money for buy the food.

우리 많이 먹지 않는 게 좋을 것 같아. 왜냐하면 우리는 음식을 사는데 모든 돈을 썼거든.

We shouldn't eat too much. Because we spent all the money buying food.

5.

I bet you he is right.  -  I bet he is right

그는 옳다고 내가 장담해.

I bet you we will be rich.  -  I bet we will be rich.

확신하는데 우리는 부자가 될 거야.